1- Focus on British Film Industry and use examples of BRITISH films
2- Use examples from Working Title (Warp and Hollywood are comparisons)
3- Refer back to the question, key word: IMPACT
4- Institutions and Audience is the main focus in any question, discuss these two areas where you have studied
5- Use the word 'audience' in the place of 'people/you/us' unless it's personal opinion
6- Terminology is key: processes, audience, conglomerate
7- PEE - point, evidence, explain
I will improve my essay writing by taking into consideration the targets above and mainly using the 3rd, because I substitute some terminology with other words if I can't remember, and the 6th as I tend to forget the question and go off task. The 7th target is also helpful as when I learnt this in GCSE English I had forgotten that I can still use it now, so next time I will include this in my essay as well.
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